Kia ora Tim, I like the way your have placed the words on your map. Were you born in Australia? Where did you get the idea for this activity? To be Cybersmart please edit your map and take your family name off the it and replace it with "Family". Mā te wā
This is Charlotte from the Summer Learning Journey program. I am happy to see that you are already participating in our Summer Learning Journey!
Your blog post about your family culture is awesome! It sounds like you have a very cool family that loves to help out others! I think that using a picture of Australia as the background of your blog post was a very cool and creative idea and helped then readers connect with your post!
I noticed that as well as having the background of your post as a picture of Australia, your family also speaks English Australian, does this mean that your family is from Australia? If so, what part of Australia is your favourite? What are the biggest differences about living in Australia compared to living in New Zealand? Could you add some of these to your post?
Keep continuing to blog in order to increase your chances of winning one of the awesome Summer Learning Journey prizes up for grabs!
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Kia ora Tim,
ReplyDeleteI like the way your have placed the words on your map. Were you born in Australia?
Where did you get the idea for this activity?
To be Cybersmart please edit your map and take your family name off the it and replace it with "Family".
Mā te wā
Mrs Torrie
Hello Tim
ReplyDeleteThis is Charlotte from the Summer Learning Journey program. I am happy to see that you are already participating in our Summer Learning Journey!
Your blog post about your family culture is awesome! It sounds like you have a very cool family that loves to help out others!
I think that using a picture of Australia as the background of your blog post was a very cool and creative idea and helped then readers connect with your post!
I noticed that as well as having the background of your post as a picture of Australia, your family also speaks English Australian, does this mean that your family is from Australia? If so, what part of Australia is your favourite? What are the biggest differences about living in Australia compared to living in New Zealand? Could you add some of these to your post?
Keep continuing to blog in order to increase your chances of winning one of the awesome Summer Learning Journey prizes up for grabs!
Thank you,
Charlotte