This is Charlotte from the Summer Learning Journey, and I will be commenting on your posts during your time participating in the SLJ.
The foods that you choose to take to sea were very good choices, and I can tell that you put a lot of thought into what you would choose. I like how you have included some pictures in your post, these really help the reader to visualise your writing!
I looking forward to reading some of your future blog posts.
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Positive - something done well Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia Ora Tim,
ReplyDeleteThis is Charlotte from the Summer Learning Journey, and I will be commenting on your posts during your time participating in the SLJ.
The foods that you choose to take to sea were very good choices, and I can tell that you put a lot of thought into what you would choose. I like how you have included some pictures in your post, these really help the reader to visualise your writing!
I looking forward to reading some of your future blog posts.
Ngā mihi nui
Charlotte