Hi Tim I am very impressed with your poem Tim. I like your choice of words. They created a vivid picture in my mind when I read it. Putting a picture of a field of poppies behind your poem was an excellent idea. Well done Tim Mrs Fisher
Kia ora Tim, I like the way the poem has a shape. Has this type of poem got a special name? Maybe you could edit your post and add some detail about how you wrote the poem, what was easy, what was challenging and where you got your poppy image from. Mā te wā Mrs Torrie
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Hi Tim
ReplyDeleteI am very impressed with your poem Tim. I like your choice of words. They created a vivid picture in my mind when I read it. Putting a picture of a field of poppies behind your poem was an excellent idea. Well done Tim
Mrs Fisher
Mrs Fisher
Kia ora Tim,
ReplyDeleteI like the way the poem has a shape. Has this type of poem got a special name? Maybe you could edit your post and add some detail about how you wrote the poem, what was easy, what was challenging and where you got your poppy image from.
Mā te wā
Mrs Torrie