Kia ora Tim, I like the second line of your poem because that is what I think a goat does mostly all the time. Is this a type of poem? It is shaped a bit like a diamond or a kite? Mā te wā Mrs Torrie
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Hi Tim
ReplyDeleteI like your poem you have used some great words to describe your goat. The line I like best is 'cheeky naughty goat'.
Mrs Bayley
Kia ora Tim,
ReplyDeleteI like the second line of your poem because that is what I think a goat does mostly all the time.
Is this a type of poem? It is shaped a bit like a diamond or a kite?
Mā te wā
Mrs Torrie
i like your poem Tim. i also think goats are really cool and funny.
ReplyDeleteHello Tim,
ReplyDeleteUsing Coco the goat was a super topic for your diamante poem. Is that Coco in the background? Did you take the photo?
Hello Mrs Shaw
ReplyDeleteI didn't Mrs Shaw. I remember when Coco was so little we had her in inside
have you got a goat Mrs Shaw ?